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Four Qualities of an Amazing College Essay Here are some of the qualities of an amazing essay: I find it’s best to illustrate by example, so here are the premises for two amazing essays: Premise of the “Dead Bird” essay: a girl is doing her homework one day when her cat claws a bird (almost) to death and as the narrator tries desperately to save the bird’s life she makes a life-changing realization about a friend of hers who was killed. Like a series of snapshots, or a film with very quick takes.2. The ending is both The wind, the sky, the dampness of the soil on my hands whispered to me, “The bird is dead. But you are alive.” My breath, my heartbeat, my sweat sighed back, “I am alive. Note that it’s easy to do this poorly and hard to do this well. I’m not saying that’s required for an amazing essay, but I think it’s part of makes my heart swell every time I read these two. Keep in mind that these are not the only qualities of an amazing essay or even required to make your essay amazing, these are simply qualities that I have observed in essays that I find amazing.
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